I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 26 October 2018
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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
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Hello I'm Zoe!I really like how you added some of the birds you saw and how many tuatara. I wish I was in your group! It sounded like so much fun and also did you go to the building with a hole in the ground that had glass sealed over? I thought you could add a little bit more detail like for example who your guide was or maybe some other things you saw.
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